Jill Lepore, in These Truths, her magnificent history of the United States—the history you thought you knew but didn’t—shows that Roosevelt was also a great editor.
She gives an example:
FDR’s secretary of labor, Frances Perkins, drafted a radio address for him. It contained this sentence: “We are trying to construct a more inclusive society.”
When Roosevelt delivered the speech, it came out: “We are going to make a country in which no one is left out.”
That’s editing.
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Mike Feinsilber spent about a quarter century with UPI in Pittsburgh, Columbus, Harrisburg, Newark, New York, Saigon and Washington and about a quarter century with AP in Washington, with a spell as assistant bureau chief and a stint as writing coach.
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